Product, Range and Distribution - Crit

We worked in groups and showed our design boards to one and other. We have to fill in a form per person with this criteria - 

Comments on research to date
Areas for improvement
Areas for further development

It was hard working out what people had to do in terms of work but after a while it was a really good way of thinking about peoples work as well as your own.

After speaking with people I realised my aims, target audience and tone of voice  -

Aim of looking at this topic is to highlight the stupid things people say and make them think about how lucky they are

Target audience is going to be 1st world people, because it would not be funny or appropriate in the other sectors

Tone of voice is going to be tongue in cheek, funny and lighthearted

After looking through this subject I think a piece of printed media would work well to communicate my ideas. I have been collecting real things people say and think using them would work well.

IDEAS

Posters of the quotes
Booklet or some form of publication of the quotes