Screen Print, Crit

 I presented these three designs for the crit and asked two questions.


= A lot of suits, dark colours, power and fast pace

- Can't find a good colour to work with, any suggestions?
- Do you know what the things in design 2 are?








Feedback Highlights

For the bluetooth design - centre one image of it, balance layout.
Don't like bluetooth, too cluttered.
Not easy to tell what it is.
Not the foggiest idea what it is.

For beard design - Make it more textured and less vectored. 
Half tone the beard.

For De Niro design - Might not be able to use his face.
Use a coloured outline.

A lot of people suggested drawing a suit, on it's own or with a suit. Although I liked this idea I have more vision with the beard, because of the suggestion to make it more textured.